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Tuesday, 17 January 2012

I AM YOUR OWN!....

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  1. O if u will call with such intensity he wil hv to come..deep longin is reflected here...

    Lovely

    Love
    Mani

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  2. How dare he leave you waiting... Does he not see that you are the moon and the sun and his indifference will soon scare you away, and then your smile will be for somebody else and your moments will no longer be wasted in the torment of silence. Silly boy.

    Beautiful poem my lady!

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    1. whatever may happen,my smile will never be for somebody else. It is and will be for him only.

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  3. You capture the essence of waiting beautifully - and I like that everyone can relate with their own experiece!
    Great job -
    Neil

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    1. I dunno! i just poured my anguish here!

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  4. I feel the pain and longing here. Continue to spill on the page. Love will soon come.

    http://lyricfire.typepad.com/lyric-fire/2012/01/lyric-fire-soul-diving-partial-poempart-confession.html

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    1. Thank you, dear Tameka! i get restless even if he goes away for just some days.

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  5. Hello Autumn.
    I feel your longing, your annoyance, your waiting.
    Beautifully expressed. Nice imagery too. Is it one of yours?
    Thanks for sharing.

    Special Celebration (Part.1): Wedding Anniversary!

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  6. dear Andy, thank you for your appreciation. what do you mean by 'is it one of yours?'Are you casting doubts? It hurts.

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    1. "I am your own" is music to a lover's ears... I truly love how it sounds :)

      The waiting isn't in vain, he'll come :)

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    2. Hello Autumn.
      I know you are incredibly talented & I am sorry if I offended you in any way...that was not my intention at all. Perhaps I didn't ask the question properly & if so, that's my fault. What I should have said was did you draw it? That's it...no doubt, no nothing. Please accept my sincerest apologies for the hurt.

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    3. No, the background wasn't drawn by me. I took that pic. from google and printed my poem onto it. Most of my poems are done in this way.

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  7. I don't have words for your expression....really. Pain can be felt only.

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  8. The words convey such indepth emotions....specially the last few lines takes it to the next level....happy to be a follower of ur blog....:)

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    1. Thank you, dear Elvira(Elli). By the way, what a coincidence! My nickname is 'ELLE'!

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