..d arrogant kingfisher...stabs into d water....d lake smiles back..and chuckles wid ripples....loved des lines...i loved d imagery of ur poem..n d captivating words of beauty..i feel transported to dat forest....d last three lines..was d icing on d cake....u sure do feel someone's loving presence.. :)
Beautiful...I could see things as I read this poem..the imagery is great you place the reader right inside it.
We do feel HIS presence everywhere...nice.
Autumn, this was a lovely walk with you through the forest and to the water. I love the rhythm, and the loving presence. Happy Valentine's Day my dear!
In the presence of the divine, perhaps? :) God's creation is so inspirational.Beautiful and playful poem, Autumn!Blessings!
Really enjoyed reading this Autumn, I could see this place in my minds eye and wished I was there. Nature always gets the last word!!!jpbrandanophoto.com.
I just remembered Kermit the frog singing..."in the quiet of the evening...what do I hear?"If I truly listened to the woods, I'll be hearing more :)